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Holiday Writing

My holiday

Who	What	When	Why	Where
My mum karina My dad dima	Went to beach for a good swim	On 25 of jan	For a good swim in the salty water	clevdon

Smell	See	Hear	Feel	Taste	Think/say
I smelt bbq	I saw nice golden sand and a beautiful ocean	I heard the waves crashing and people cheering for the volly ball players.	I felt the hot yellow sand and the cold blue sea.	I could taste ice cream melting down my chin and the tasty sausage sizzles.	When i got there i thank and said i am ganna have a lot of fun.

When I was five minutes away from arriving to my location I listened very closely and the engine went thump! Thump! As soon as that happened we pulled over then we saw smoke coming out but lucky my dad was a mechanic so he checked it out.

I went with my mum and dad, their names are Dima and Karina, they saw the chain was not running so we called my grandma because she lived close to the beach. When she arrived the first thing she did was call a tow truck. After five minutes he still had not come so I was getting worried.

We walked twenty five minutes away from the car. The first thing I thought was I am going to have a lot of fun’ and just then I smelt a smell so wonderful and extraordinary that smelt like sausage sizzles.

I saw a nice beautiful blue sea and bright golden sand but
It was so hot it burnt my foot so then I instantly dived in the wonderful chilling salt water with all my clothes and no change of shirts or shorts.

Then I realize I forgot to warn everyone about the car. So I walked away guilty but then we spotted Mr Whippy so i walked over there first I asked my dad for money then when I ate it I could feel it dripping down my chin.

By Andre.

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